In terms of grammar and word use, there isn't much that I can criticize about this writing since its really good, and probably better that what I can write. The author is extremely descriptive and uses imagery in every part of the writing. However, there are some things that I find quite wrong. The author says things like; advertisements prey on insecurities, models' bodies are unattainable, and also refer to women and girls as "victims." This is way over exaggerated. You just can't expect these companies to use obese woman in advertisements instead, in order to make others feel good about themselves. And one other thing is, why does the writer only focus on females? All of the male models are also pretty rare to come across. They all have perfectly built bodies and nice beards. The author shouldn't just ignore this, men have feelings too, you know. Finally, I think  that the author includes some unnecessary information. Especially when they refer to/ dedicate a whole paragraph to Rosa Parks and Cesar Chavez. They are completely unrelated.