In this article the
author argues that technology is one of the best things that has happened in
this generation but I see it a lot different than that:
I remember when I was
young and the internet wasn’t something used on a daily basis, cell phones were
used for calling, and apple wasn’t even a thing yet. I find technology to be
very useful, but I also think it’s extremely damaging. When I was younger I
didn’t have a cell phone and I knew how to have fun with my friends without
using technology. Kids now don’t even know what going outside and having fun is
anymore. Most kids are receiving cell phones by ages as young as 10 years old.
If a child gets a cell phone at an early age like that there is more chance
that they will become much more dependent on it. Technology is now the new way
of entertainment for kids anymore. This is becoming a major social issue as well.
This seems silly but a lot of relationships don’t end in face to face anymore
they rely on their phones to do it for them. Society has changed so much that
something that seems so necessary to discuss face to face is almost completely disregarded,
this seems like the normal thing to do now days. Using technology for things
work related is acceptable in many cases. Jobs all around the nation rely on
the internet, so if the internet would be down, work would be over for the day.
These new technologies have become something people all around the world have invested
their money into, and almost no technology is cheap. People pay ridiculous prices
for certain types of technology, and sometimes even up to eight hundred dollars
for a cell phone alone. I’m not completely against technology, but relying on something
that we would in any case have to go without would be a complete inconvenience
to most of us. If something like your cell phone were to break I’m almost
completely sure you wouldn’t be calling many people because all of that contact
information is stored in the cell phone. If something were to go wrong with the internet,
or just technology in general the world would become complete chaos, even if amount
of time was a total of twenty four hours. The world needs to become less dependent
on technology.
i think you have good points to your argument. You use how it affects the kids as they grow up and how it is affecting society as a whole. I like that you admit that technology is ridiculous, yet a convenience. This will be an interesting argument to read about and i think it will grab the attention of your audience.
ReplyDeleteThis paper points out many problems technology comes with very well. It also does a good job comparing kids use of technology now versus back when we were kids. I like that your view of the topic is clear. The last sentence shows us clearly what your final conclusion is. Good job.
ReplyDeleteI think your paper bring up a very relevant and important topic. I like the many points how technology has changed the interaction between humans talking. It is a good idea that you addressed the good and bad things about technology.
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